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Journey
Contributed by
Taurusgem1
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A journey
Embarking the unknown
Growing up is so hard
Too many things to do and see
Hurry
You must hurry
Embrace everything
Do you really see it?
No,
Growing up is so fast
You missed everything
Opportunities were wasted
Driving
Going so fast, as if you are
Speeding along the road
Missing the scenery
Flowers
So bright, dancing
Colors of the rainbow
All blurred
Mixing
Blending together, life
A batch of spilled paints
Creating murky messes
Take a breath
Look back
You cant start again
But you can start now
Enjoy
Dont go so fast
Teach the young
They dont know
They are, just as you
Embarking on the
Intense journey of life
Growing up is so hard
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Taurusgem1
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2005-02-15 13:09:25]
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Re: Journey
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:33:58 PM AEST
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I can see you're serious about your writing. Nice stuff.
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Re: Journey
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by brew on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:47:03 PM AEST
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| So true.that is why i wrote the one about time.seems no one wants to take the time or appericate anything , any more. Good write |
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