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Pain
Contributed by
xoxpaperxheartxox
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:19:43 PM in AEST
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All the pain you put me through
Always telling me your love was true
You should find out what your bull**** love will do
Because in reality i did love you
So now my heart is all black and blue
Because of all the pain i get from you
I dont know what to do
You keep telling me "i love you"
Why should i believe this i know its not true
I love you so much but you have no ******* clue
All the pain you put me through
Its over for me and you
Because of the words "I Love You"
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Re: Pain
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by Onslaught on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST
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| Isn't it weird that the words "I love you" can either cause Extreme happiness or Extreme sorrow? But in the end, I guess its only the "True Love" that you will remember above all else. It hurts, but one cannot truly make an enlightened statement about anything in their life until the last second before they die. But usually in most cases people find their true source of happiness much earlier than that. Good job, very emotional. So Peace to you and to everyone you know and meet. Later. |
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Re: Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:31:10 AM AEST
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| be proud of your work, cant wait to see more. |
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Re: Pain
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:18:50 PM AEST
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I loved this poem, this was a great write! Maybe even your best, keep it up I'll keep reading.
xox
amanda |
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