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Precious Love
Contributed by
Willofree
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Precious love is like a valuable gem
Its beauty reflected, both outside and in
With its delicate features, all angles and dimensions
Like a kaleidoscope of color emanating from a rainbow
This shimmer that exudes light from within
Is truly dazzling to the eye
It twinkles in the dark and sparkles in the sunlight
Truly a wonder to behold
Its beauty cherished as a work of art
Luxurious and valuable as nature's creation
Rare indeed, a precious commodity
Upon the finger, so beautiful to display
Available for a bride to wear one day
Its clandestine mission in life, to signal a special union
So wear this symbol of love on your finger with pride
As it represents strength and beauty inside
A commitment that could last a lifetime
With a special partner and this precious gem of mine
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-02-15 16:10:02]
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Re: Precious Love
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:12:34 PM AEST
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| I think that it is finished. good write |
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Re: Precious Love
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:21:49 PM AEST
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| Great write. It seems very complete! Much peace my friend. Laura |
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Re: Precious Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:00:05 AM AEST
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This was such a beautiful write, very sweet and enjoyable to read. Awesome write.
Jane x |
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Re: Precious Love
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:46:51 PM AEST
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I think you have completed it Terry. I think it wraps up quite nicely ... well done, sir.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Precious Love
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:21:32 PM AEST
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| I think it was ended very niceley.. i liked it alot.... |
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