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An angels call
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:26:03 PM in AEST
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The angles they will call me,
On the winds of newborn spring,
Softly singing words of truth,
To hear, to know, to be.
And my breath will catch within my chest,
As I know these words are true,
Then I will become the one who's singing,
To spread the words to you.
And contented I will continue,
And no pain will bar my path,
Because I know that things are better now,
Than they have been in the past,
And the words I hear will sooth me,
And now they may sooth you,
As I sing the words the angels told me,
The words of naught but truth.
Now just let them seep into you,
Like water turns the sand to clay,
And let the words become you,
Then slowly sing yourself away.
Away with all the angels,
Who sing to you their lullabyes,
The words I will not place here,
But know they guide my life.
Thankyou all my angels,
For everytime you heard my cries,
And sang to me your answers,
The ones I could not seem to find.
I love you all, dear angels,
You guide me on the way,
Without your song I could not sing,
To all those here today.
I won't forget you now my angels..
I will still watch for your wings...
For you will be here in my heart,
And I will always sing...
(When I hear your call)
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Re: An angels call
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:33:04 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem. |
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Re: An angels call
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:36:36 PM AEST
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What a beautiful write. I hope we all have our guardian angels. Your poem is full of loving and caring thoughts, may you be blessed for having such a loving heart.
Beautiful write
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Re: An angels call
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:59:18 PM AEST
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| that could be a song..it flowed as smoothe as water or silk..or ...a song.:-) |
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Re: An angels call
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:59:35 PM AEST
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| I'd have to say this among your best, of coarse poetry with a purpose is always the best. |
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Re: An angels call
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:23:47 PM AEST
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Phil ... that is fabulous. I am humbled to be included in that list of incredible individuals. I am deeply touched by the words and the sentiment. I could sing this still ... the melody is there in my head ... that doesn't often happen with me when reading the works of others. You struck a deep resonant chord with this one.
Nazzy ~
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Re: An angels call
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:39:38 PM AEST
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| What a sweet poem. Beautifully written. |
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Re: An angels call
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:00:06 AM AEST
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Phil this was absolutely delightful to read, it’s so poetically refreshing from all the drama in this site. You have shown such wonderful feelings of love and adoration this was just beautiful.
An inspiring read from a wonderful poet.
*Hugs*
Jane ^_^
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Re: An angels call
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:26:57 AM AEST
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Hey, simply beautiful, an angel couldn't have said it better . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: An angels call
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:16:54 AM AEST
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Yes, fabulous, but more than just an incredible write, it's full of the incredible YOU that has always been there waiting to come out. I am honored to be a part of your life, honored to be mentioned here, and honored (most of all) by what you have done for me in your loyal friendship.
Love you,
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Re: An angels call
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:22:16 AM AEST
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Simply Gorgeous. I don't think I have read anything written so perfectly in a while.
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Re: An angels call
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:05:15 PM AEST
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Phil, every time I read your latest I think about how much you are growing. You have such a way with emotion!!!! I can literally FEEL it in your writes.
I won't forget you either, and Thank you!!!!!
HUGGGSSSSS form the other Phil |
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Re: An angels call
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:55:44 PM AEST
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Well, Phil, this is beautiful. And I thank you very, very much for the inclusion of my name in such an honor. You know it's not often I, or many people, find a friend good enough to value my words and beliefs so much, and I really appreciate it, and hope that I might come close to deserving it, as we all I hope journey on to better hearts and greater wisdom.
God bless.
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Re: An angels call
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:32:27 AM AEST
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wow Philly, that was truly amazing, it was lovely and touched me so deep, thank you for the mention hun *HUGGIES*
pix xx |
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Re: An angels call
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:04:48 PM AEST
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AWWWWW it so beautiful and sweet .
I say this is without a doubt your master piece.bravo.5 stars |
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Re: An angels call
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 03:06:26 PM AEST
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beautiful and sooo sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: An angels call
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:31:32 PM AEST
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Wow this is really lovely.
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Re: An angels call
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty and gratatude.
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Re: An angels call
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by OnAngelswings on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 10:25:48 AM AEST
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| nicely done...I am sure all those who have been there love this tribute to them ....Shari |
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Re: An angels call
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:25:37 PM AEST
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| Such a beautifully written and touching poem. Amazingly sweet. |
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