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Micheal
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:43:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Dammit all defined
I can not love with broken eyes
You so light through heavy words
Cursed the sober and made it worse
You fill the men i've known before
And tamperd with the ones i've met thereafter
I've hit and lost and bit and cried
Still, your this fondled creature
I've done everything but dealt with it head on...
But im scared to even think of life without you.
You were there, you are here, and an aura of filth says you will be there soon...
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LevyMetal
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2005-02-15 17:43:07]
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Re: Micheal
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:53:36 PM AEST
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| i like this. i think its original and well written. you define your relationship with this guy pretty well for such a short poem. great job! |
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Re: Micheal
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:16:32 PM AEST
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You were there, you are here, and an aura of filth says you will be there soon...
this part struck me. It says a lot about how you have conflicting feelings toward your relationship with your boyfriend. I like that word "filth". It's dirty, in a grimy, gritty kind of way.
Be True,
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