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Under The Knife
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:06:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Arm out Please, now clench a fist
don't over do it the doctor insist's,
lay down, relax, you'll soon be asleep
but when i wake in Pain i weep,
the lights overhead pass by quite slow
now blurry and dull an off yellow glow,
a bed of starch, im now transverse
living my life, living this Curse,
bound in this tomb until im able
back on my feet and feeling stable,
believe me, I Know, its such a hard life
Spending your years Under The Knife....
Louisa Montagu (cc)
BBRymz Productions
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2005-02-16 05:06:25]
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Re: Under The Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:11:35 PM AEST
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'its such a hard life
Spending your years Under The Knife....'
'living my life, living this Curse'
nicely written...good rhyming, nice use of words. i like the whole thing...great job...
Auryn
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