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I Saw The Light
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sinned
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:56:49 PM in AEST
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It was a fun filled night Baby and I had a nasty fight Drank too much and got a little tight Told me plainily She was angry Buddy you'll ne'ver see the light To prove her wrong my ever plight
It was raining when I left that bar Little past two going on four I crawled into my car Buckled my seat belt in about an hour
I drove off in the misty rain It was dark and my eyes were strained My head aching my heart full of pain She said I'm tired of your drinking again
Told me plainly She was angry Buddy you'll ne'ver see the light To prove her wrong my ever plight
I wonder if she will miss me like I miss her tonight I never even saw the flashing lights I crashed the gate with dawns early light Her last words membering
Told me plainly She was angry Buddy you'll ne'ver see the light To prove her wrong my ever plight
I remember my last look to the right Freight train freight train that blaring light Sparks of lightning fear and fright Hello Saint Peter I saw the light
Sinned
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Re: I Saw The Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:36:32 PM AEST (User
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That was cool - definitely interesting and original.
Awesome job - I really enjoyed it!
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Re: I Saw The Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:55:42 PM AEST (User
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Whoa! I wasn't expecting that ending. Awesome write! |
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Re: I Saw The Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by BEBE on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 10:47:06 AM AEST (User
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This poem is great... i loved how you you kept writing told me plainly she was angry Buddy you'll ne'ver see the light
To prove her wrong my ever plight
you kept me interested.... great write
God bless
*BEBE
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