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This stage of control
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:04:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i finally found a feeling that isnt in use
if you touch it, it wont trigger the reason of abuse
In the dawning of an ending i already knew
Dont you touch me, touch me until its intentions are true
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LevyMetal
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2005-02-16 18:04:33]
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Re: This stage of control
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:33:24 PM AEST
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THIS IS GOOD. But short... but hey! who cares... i would like to read more of your stuff
need to talk? aim= Bebe_queen15
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Re: This stage of control
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 11:10:07 AM AEST
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| yeah. like bebe said. short but good. keep it up and hopefully the next one will be longer. (the longer the more enjoyable.) it feels like it could be song lyrics. (which i like) very cool, keep writing please! |
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