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Ironic Justice
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:58:56 PM in AEST
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Ive felt the gentle steps of suicide
Born upon hatred, built on a lie
Caressing every needle prick, i glide
As falling tears of madness, evaporate within
You see within this mirror, such emptiness
A reflection captured, lost in time
Locked inside a prison with no walls
Remembering each silent song, that was never sung
To walk along a path where no man has ever set foot
Each step but a void of hollow sounds and screams
Slowly walking down this road of mortal coil
I envelop in my destiny, living to never see death
I yearn for the object that mere men cower from
How sweet fate has decided an ironic justice
To take my life would be like poetry in motion
But lady fate would condemn me to live forever
Love is such a cruel and heartless beast
Taking no prisoners in its endless grasp of damnation
To watch everything you love so dear leave this world
Knowing that you can never join them in their bliss
As gently as the steps of suicide I tread the earth forever
Watching as my every passion dies out with my soul
I am left with nothing but a hollow shell of hatred
And a song... that was never sung
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2005-02-16 18:58:56]
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Re: Ironic Justice
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by noone on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 07:28:24 PM AEST
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I can see why you like this piece of writing so much, it is absolutly fabulous! It really is just breathtaking. Also very unique. I love it. Please keep posting,
Kirsty x |
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Re: Ironic Justice
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:30:29 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH... I can see why you are poating it again... you sure are a poet sent from god..
GOD BLESS
ever need to talk? AIM = Bebe_queen15
BEBE* |
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Re: Ironic Justice
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:30:32 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH... I can see why you are poating it again... you sure are a poet sent from god..
GOD BLESS
ever need to talk? AIM = Bebe_queen15
BEBE* |
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Re: Ironic Justice
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:31:22 PM AEST
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| i liked this piece very much indeedy. |
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Re: Ironic Justice
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:43:02 AM AEST
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I don't recall seeing this when it was originally posted - so I, for one, am glad that you reposted it. : )
The emotional behind this is obvious... it bleeds through. The entire piece is moving but that last line *sigh* splits me wide open.
Powerful, Luke... I'm glad I didn't miss this.
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