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always
Contributed by
bebe20071
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 07:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I always dreamed of you each night
and i imaged you as my magical knight
I always did the asking and did the talking
you alway pretend to listen and kept ignoring
now i have grown
and there is alot to be known
I will forget you and hit may books
I will study hard and careless about my looks
I always thought of you
but you thoughts always made me blue
I always cried
no more how hard i tried
so you it's what i'll forget
before it's too late and i'll regret
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2005-02-16 19:57:22]
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Re: always
(User Rating: 1 )
by jeannoh on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:27:18 AM AEST
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easy read
good flow
good use of words
I write alot of poems
out of anger
they are usually my better ones
keep writing and dont be
afraid to use your emotions
thank you for sharing
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