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untitled
Contributed by
CoLD
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My eyes fill with tearsdrops
who wait patiently to cascade down my face
Instead I smile and close my eyes
to hold them back again
I don't know why I feel this way,
I shouldn't have this pain
When I first met you
I couldn't even remember your name
Thinking back like that and seeing all the time that's past
and nothing's really changed,
makes my eyes water up
and swell with reddening pain...
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CoLD
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2005-02-16 22:09:29]
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Re: untitled
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 04:16:23 PM AEST
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| good one, i like the use of the tears. |
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Re: untitled
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:44:41 PM AEST
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| That was very good. You expressed your emotions very well. I agree the use of tears was great! |
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