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Slow creeping insanity
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:43:48 AM in AEST
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oops
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the days
Are getting shorter
and the nights are getting l o n g e r
There's people getting lonely
But there's no one getting stronger
And life is not what it used to be
There is no remedy
for adolescence and naivety
but blood for tears and
my innocent simplicity
Some voice
echoing off the walls and down my halls
of forgoten things
Like the sound of my forgoten words
writen louder to drown out the noise
of the pain coming down around me
The world
is comeing to put me away
my heart cannot understand
There is no escape from my
slowly creeping insanity,
(that has traped my soul in quicksand)
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socialmisfit
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2005-02-17 01:43:48]
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Re: Slow creeping insanity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:56:05 AM AEST
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Insanity lurks deep within each of us. Writing it all out seems to keep us on sanity's path
Nice write of deep rooted emotions.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Slow creeping insanity
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:38:48 AM AEST
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I can relate.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Slow creeping insanity
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by JGB on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 02:15:26 PM AEST
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| I like this. It's written well and I feel as if I too have been there. |
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