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OUR HUMAN CONSCIOUSNESS IS OUR CAGE
Contributed by
Onslaught
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:53:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Our emotions, our cage Our humanity, our cage Our Consciousness, our cage
Let it all go, let it all be forgotten, Break free Expand out beyond our own naturally instilled pitiful human helplessness In this year, humanity is like the worm before the cocoon Blind, Slow, weak, and struggling desperately to survive
But for the worm after the cocoon, And for humanity after the next universal uprising within the TIME WAVE ZERO The worm will leave its formerly subservient body behind, As it emerges from its formerly confining cage The worm will emerge resembling nothing of its former self, As a butterfly, with wings of perfection and beauty, flying high into the sky, Unaffected by gravity, unaffected by its former weaknesses.
Our Emotions is our cage Our Humanity is our cage Our Consciousness is our cage But soon there will be nothing That can hold what those special few The elite of humanity Will become
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Re: OUR HUMAN CONSCIOUSNESS IS OUR CAGE
(User Rating: 1 ) by x_midnight_x on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:07:17 AM AEST (User
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nice poem although (But soon there will be nothing
That can hold what those special few
The elite of humanity
Will become)
i think we are all logs in the same fire..and non are above nor below others be...non of elite but all you and me..even those murderous and smothered in woe,will one day burn brightly and become as aglow.
cheers :) i love poetry that makes us think tick...tock :) |
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Re: OUR HUMAN CONSCIOUSNESS IS OUR CAGE
(User Rating: 1 ) by assassinatorgirl on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:23:06 PM AEST (User
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That's so true. You have such a way with words. I am so bad at conveying how I feel with them. You can put your finger on it so well, and open up the eyes of how exactly it is, because you tell it that way. I love all your poems :D |
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