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crimson promise
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the words no longer flowing.
i take it out on my arms, my legs, my flesh.
and an explosion of red seeps through my skin.
i need this release of words to keep living.
but nothing will come with this tiny white pill.
it's not okay anymore and i think i might die...
the little orange bottle of agony waits at my bedside.
a strip of tape across my mouth.
they force it in my body and now the tears won't come.
so i cut my skin and let everything flow.
it's better that way. i promise.
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2005-02-17 06:21:48]
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Re: crimson promise
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:34:56 AM AEST
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| woah that had a scary message, i didnt like the meaning but it got acvross to me well with the method you used for writting it, i liked how you put it basicly, but the meaning was scary! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxjazzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: crimson promise
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:12:41 AM AEST
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Very well done. I hope things get better for you.
Take Care
- Becca |
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