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The Snow Queen.
Contributed by
jackwilde
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:12:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The Snow Queen travels through the night,
Through the village but out of sight,
She freezes little boys, by capturing their hearts,
Then it's back to the palace to play ice darts,
She pins the boys against the wall,
Then says "ha! ha! goodbye you all,
Goodbye, goodbye my little ones,
You have been, such sporting fun,
Now all the problems my eyes have seen,
I will never get caught by a Snow Queen!
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jackwilde
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:17:43 AM AEST
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Jack this was really good, the rymes were good. You're really turning out to be a threat to your daddy's writing LOL. Hope to see more.
Hugs,
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by Flipped_out on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:22:57 AM AEST
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Ha ha Jack this is soo cool..icy cool you are really quite a natural at this very clever
Huge (warm ) hug Jack
Kell xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:49:55 AM AEST
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| well done once again jack daddy's really proud of you xxx |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:53:55 AM AEST
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| this was awesome and fun to read, really enjoyable :), great job! |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:06:21 AM AEST
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Brilliant! very well written and it flowed perfectly. Nicely done.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:00:36 AM AEST
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Oooh, this is really good.
You have alot of talent.
The rhyme and the flow is reallygood.
And this has some good imagery.
Good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:01:44 AM AEST
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Sounds like you have been reading the Narnia series. Nice work. Keep writing. I enjoy reading your stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 12:08:07 PM AEST
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| does she have one of those freezing crackly voices..as she says goodbye??? ohhhh I can just hear her..you write such descriptive things..well done.. |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:27:34 PM AEST
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Reminds me a bit of Narnia. I should get back into those books someday.
I'm glad you've let your imagination run into a poem here. Fantastic job.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:41:38 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of the Narnia books, I love it! Great poem. |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by dtborchert on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:47:11 PM AEST
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Very well done, Jack. Sorry I missed this.
Hugs,
Tena |
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Re: The Snow Queen.
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST
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enchantingly beautifully written poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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