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GAP OF FAITH
Contributed by
lemmen
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Upon the crystal sea of love they travel
Thought time each searching
For a different path
Not seeing the love they truly have
For one another
Each hoping they will be together.
Each looking the wrong way.
He see her but is afraid of the leap he must take.
His faith he cannot find
She see him but the gap of the crystal sea is to far.
Neither dose she have the faith to leap
Different paths they travel
WILL THEY MEET
Will they have the faith to leap
Can they find the strength to love once again
They travel upon the crystal sea of love
Not knowing it is each other they seek
But hoping their travels will interconnect
May love and faith pave their way
And bridge the gap of FATE
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2005-02-17 13:47:28]
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Re: GAP OF FAITH
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by sean88 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:53:56 PM AEST
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its a very nice poem!! keep them coming :)
sean xxx |
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Re: GAP OF FAITH
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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Re: GAP OF FAITH
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by THORN on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:44:59 AM AEST
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The rhymes were fantastic. 5 stars. Good work, Dennis ;)
Cheers,
-xXRayeXx |
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