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I heard You.
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:18:43 PM in AEST
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You think I dont listen,
So you scream in my face more.
Im not deaf, mommy.
I hear everything you say to me,
Everything you say to other people,
All the stuff you told to Dad.
I heard it mom.
I know youre upset with me,
I know you say to people,
That you just dont love me sometimes.
I know you think Im too hard to handle.
I know your plans of sending me away.
You think I didnt listen,
So you screamed louder,
You hit me harder,
Im not deaf, mommy.
I wish I didnt hear everything you said.
I know that Im not the greatest kid,
But I never thought I was as awful as you said.
You hit me really hard one day,
You screamed a lot more.
You swung a knife at my face,
You cursed and you swore.
It hurt my ears real bad,
You were only a step away.
Im sorry mommy,
But I made up my mind that day.
I promised Id make your life easier.
I took a knife, like the one you swung.
I used it to cut my wrists,
I cut my legs too,
My hips as well.
I took a lot of pills each night,
Hoping Id go to hell.
The place you said I belonged.
It never worked.
So I cut deeper,
I stopped talking to you like you asked,
I stopped looking at you, like you warned.
And on your birthday I took more pills,
As much as I could stomach.
The next day I had to go to the hospital,
They didnt know what was wrong.
But to your misfortune I had survived.
Now youre madder than ever,
So Im sorry mommy,
Im sorry Im alive.
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Re: I heard You.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:55:59 PM AEST
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Re: I heard You.
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:40:11 AM AEST
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VERY deep write Amanda...Sad the reads wer'nt up there....I really liked the ending even though the rythym didnt start untill the middle....Great write and very original...
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Re: I heard You.
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by Mangs on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:08:49 PM AEST
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| nice write....but dont hurt yourself....nothing is worth that much....id sound like an evangelist...but be proud of who you are.... |
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Re: I heard You.
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:35:19 PM AEST
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| this is the best piece ive read from you so far. what sold me on it? the emotion. sure, a piece can be written so well that you actually feel sorry for that person, but it is not written well enough if you cant feel what they feel. this piece is amazing, the ending spectacular. ive written things with the ending concept. quite popular around here, lol. and something ive noticed with your pieces is that youre sorry for a lot of things you shouldnt be. |
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