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Ode To You
Contributed by
Smooth
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Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My God, How I love you... How I miss you... like a flower miss's spring... it fills me, and overflows me... you encompass me and bring me warmth... you lift me when I am down, and you are the reason everytime a smile cross's my eyes, my lips... for me, you are the reason the sun rises, the stars shine, the moon weeps... You are the majestic mountains, the raging river, the serenity of a summer day... You are the warm fire on a winters night, you are the purity of a hawk in flight... You are my hope of the future, you are the joy of my past... you are the cause of my great days, and my healer of the bad... There are so many things you are too me, but most importantly you are why I love, why I dream... why I am.
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2002-12-12 22:40:00]
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Re: Ode To You
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:49:39 PM AEST
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| Wow .... to love like that ... I know how it feels. Such beautiful writing. |
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Re: Ode To You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:34:08 AM AEST
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beautiful work
smooth peace
@ happiness to u. |
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Re: Ode To You
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by OreO on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 08:37:38 AM AEST
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Wow smooth i know i was gone a few days but i didnt know you'd miss me this much *smiles* justtt kidding, my breath is just completely taken away with this poem...i really hope that whomever this poem is to that she reads it and that she reads it with pride because i know i would if it was written for me...your talent never seems to stop but then again it's straight from your heart that your words come from, which i for one hope beats eternally with such beauty that it holds...you write beautifully my friend..
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Re: Ode To You
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by Leonicia on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:22:49 PM AEST
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I have always loved this poem. The emotions are so strong, and your love is so evident. I love the feelings evoked everytime I read it. You are precious.
Always,
me |
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Re: Ode To You
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by Roshie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:49:47 PM AEST
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| You are such a great writer, another beautiful poem by you! This person must be very special to you, and very lucky at that! =) |
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