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Soulless Passion
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:33:15 PM in AEST
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Soulless Passion
Freezing images of beauty
With burning eyes of passion
Gleaming in the endless sea
Of what will never be
There is a hole
Burned in his soul
His heart is pierced
With undrying tears
Of never being whole
But the cross still stands
Withered by time's sands
As it slowly rots away
With only memory left to stay
Because of bloody hands
Taking away what could be
And everything that should be
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-02-17 20:33:15]
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:44:34 PM AEST
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I'm not sure I understand this. I sure am trying though. It says so much, and I guess I could run with it so many directions, and that's what's confusing me.
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:44:43 PM AEST
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| I like how you kinda slip the christ allusion in here with the cross but not really coming out and saying it... I'm curious that is what you were writing about isn't it? Lovely, well done poem. Subtle but sends a very powerful and heart-warming message to the reader. Nice write! |
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:46:01 PM AEST
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An intreging poem, short yet powerful. Could be a religious theme, but i'm not sure that is your focus. The last line sounds so final...
Fascinating poem, good job
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:31:38 PM AEST
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I am curious about your thoughts behind this one. Passion is definately a strong part of this write...but souless?
Great thought provoker!!!!! |
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:49:48 PM AEST
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Another great write..As always..
The picture I got from this is a little...Anti-Xtian
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by sojourner on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:09:39 PM AEST
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very good poem,food for thought that can be digested any way you wish.
sojourner, |
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 05:35:59 PM AEST
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| This was very intriguing, it gave me chills.Nice to see you're still here also,things sure did change on the site while I was away and its not for the good,but your poems are like a breath of fresh air. |
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Re: Soulless Passion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:53:27 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem! The lone lines in between work really well. I really enjoyed reading this piece. |
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