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constant teary night
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:13:33 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Here it comes again, my feelings of being alone The stench of loneliness to me is not unknown I cant sleep, cant even seem dream Tired of teary nights, is there any hope to gleam? For these feelings take me over, I cant help but cry On this night I cannot smile, its impossible not I Dear God, be my refuge as I close my eyes to pray What else can I do, to make this loneliness go away? Over and over again Bang bang in my head Take everything upon you Before I take my life instead
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Re: constant teary night
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:36:13 PM AEST (User
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nice write. very personal in terms of what you're hoping for from God. interesting piece |
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Re: constant teary night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:35:46 PM AEST (User
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your work is very impressive nowadays. i dont know about before. im having memory problems, so i cant actually truthfully say it was as good as now. but you get my point. |
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