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sonic emotion 1
Contributed by
clivewar
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 08:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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flack flack flack
scraaeeeeeeee
kaploooom
dun dun dun - dun dun dun
tliptliptliptlip
fwshhhshhhshhhhh
pwchchchchxxxxxxx
hnnnnnnnnnn
flak.....flak............flak
schpiw
flak
.....................
this is my attempt at a warzone. I know it is rubbish - I have never done this before, so it is totally experimental.
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2005-02-18 08:34:26]
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Re: sonic emotion 1
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by Stitch on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:24:33 AM AEST
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It's a good experiment though. You have some natural talent with words, but I would suggest you write about something you know and feel more intimately.
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