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herself
Contributed by
mysonnet
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:04:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i know deep down she's hurt inside
and to face them up she never hides
but that's where her feelings lie
torn and battered after that fight
after that fight she's badly slain
how could she ever stand up again?
on the surface she look calm and strong
but i know she could never withstand for long
i saw her went though that struggle
against her violent emotions
now i could see her heart stagger
in that horrible condition
she could never face up to the world
to others, she's just a mentally sick girl
now i could no longer bother about her
and when i see her, my visions blur...
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2005-02-18 11:04:31]
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Re: herself
(User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:52:48 AM AEST
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Hq...this is good...But I don't understand why so many people read...36 and counting...yet NOT 1 post a comment...I feel we shoudn't be stingy with the comments...lol.
Anyways...this poem is excellent...two thumbs plus two toes all up...cheers. |
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