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The Insanity of One
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:20:52 AM in AEST
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The insanity of one
Voice, breaking the night
Bursting forth from candlelight
Formed shadows
That seem to know
By voice alone, it can be so
The insanity of one
Night, in solitude
Turning dark to something new
And different
When it is spent
The night alone, with shared intent
The insanity of one
Heart, not knowing how
To speak above a whisper now
That time has stood
With rosewood
A heart alone, knew how it could
One voice, one night, one heart
In lonely bliss
Lonesome not with
Insanitys kiss
(Thank you)
~Snemmy~
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. There's no other word for it really, well, except brilliant, incredible, excellent... so okay, there's plenty of words. Inspirational is one that stands out mostly though.
Very nicely done.
Take Care
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Stitch on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:22:34 PM AEST
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One voice, one night, one heart
In lonely bliss
Lonesome not with
Insanity’s kiss
I have felt this and been glad of it.
The loneliness doesn't last forever, but making friends with it is a very good feeling.
Stitch
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Taurusgem1 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:50:09 PM AEST
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| Very powerful and great expression... |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 03:04:08 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. Haven't we all felt insane at one point in our lives? You've caught the essence of insanity. |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 03:32:29 PM AEST
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Your comment on top makes me doubt the images this write potrays as being what you are trying to convey.
But to me at least I picture you reading poems by one of your favorite authors, late at night with the candles lit, all alone and completely happy about it,
and that I can relate to! |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 05:08:04 PM AEST
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as soon as i saw the title i thought i can relate to this! great work.
johnny. |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:30:33 PM AEST
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Lets say, just this once, I try to some up with one word, what I just read ...
Uhm, nope it can't be done ... so I'll share some insightful words from TSO ...
"...NO ONE ELSE WOULD UNDERSTAND IT
WE WOULD KNOW THE GODS HAD PLANNED IT
AND FOR SUCH A NIGHT AS THIS
THAT THEY GAVE MEMORY..."
Perhaps with every lit candle hence forth, the memory of Insanity's Kiss shall burn as well.
And no, Thank You, for sharing your gift with us.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:46:25 PM AEST
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| encore, encore. though every person is insane by extent, i fairly enjoyed this one. |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:04:25 AM AEST
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No thank you, this was just incredible hun. The images you have writen was just brilliant.
I could only wish to have your talent and verbal skills in writing poetry.
Incredible write Snemmy, thanks for posting it.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by freckle on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:51:07 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. It was a quiet read, thoroughly enjoyable.
Carol |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Moonglow on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:30:15 AM AEST
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| I loved it, it was great. You are really talented, Good for you! |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:36:16 PM AEST
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I hate to repate what everyone else has said but this is stunning.
I did get the same image as the other Phil, I'm sure the actual image you had in mind is just as beautiful.
This is a masterpiece my friend,
We all have to be insane sometimes.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:16:39 PM AEST
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I think your wonder blew through that wood once, from where my scarecrow stares . . . it is correlative of the emotion, the insanity of singing sky-scaring lullabies through the canopies of one's imagination . . .
And of course, I love it. |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by the_mouse_that_roared on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:06:41 PM AEST
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| This is an amazingly well written poem. I loved it in more ways than one. Great job! |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:27:19 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 06:18:06 PM AEST
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| A wonderfully expressed , powerful poem. Great write. |
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Re: The Insanity of One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 11:14:37 PM AEST
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No, no...thank you ;-) for another enjoyable poem.
For some reason I found this enlightening. I cannot explain why. Just did. |
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