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Death Prolonged
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sour sentiments
Scabbed up wounds
And scars that dent
Unseen disdain
Trusted truths
And lies that pain
Cancled compassion
Forever forgotten
In a broken fashion
This is life normally
Always Invisible and wronged
...
My life formally
My death prolonged
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-18 18:49:09]
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Re: Death Prolonged
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by NeonHusky on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 08:35:11 PM AEST
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| This is a very powerful poem, and the short lines are what make it so. leaves a reader thinking, good write |
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Re: Death Prolonged
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by heartbroken4ever on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:20:53 PM AEST
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You are loved and you are not forgotten and why becuz i am here so you can't say that. I love you babe and always will.
Love you
Amber |
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Re: Death Prolonged
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 12:59:02 AM AEST
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| seems like this was written around the same time as the cowrite with some of your words and verses in it. very good poem. reminds me a bit of patricks in a way. |
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Re: Death Prolonged
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 10:35:42 AM AEST
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very dark and short
good job expressing so much in so little
Flamingblade |
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