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Blanket of Love
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 07:29:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Youve held me close when all seemed to fall apart,
My warm blanket on a cold, early morning,
Lost within the depths of your safe embrace,
Not wanting to awaken from this beautiful lucid dream,
However, the progressing dawn beckons for me
Another day of endless illusions,
Friends grow apart, lovers fade, and what you thought was right, was really wrong
Cold and weary, I turn to you for comfort,
And you give me so much more
In our own little world,
A realm of love and friendship,
Such ecstasy, this feeling
You do something to me,
That gets me so confused,
Of who I amof what I want of everything
Drowning in a sea of you,
I dare not take a breath
A love that transcends eternity,
And when eternity ends, forever begins, and the cycle goes on incessantly
Its an adoration that goes beyond human conceptit justis.
More lovely than any sonnet created,
More precious than any priceless gem
Kindred spirits from the start,
Artists by soul and heart
We were meant to be,
Herelike thisyou and me.
Your voice, a melodious hymn to my heart,
The music you create resonates deliciously through my body,
And I cant help but tremble
If music be the food of love, play on
Ah, dearest Shakespeare, thy words ignite,
Roaring flames deep withinyet, his expressions so easily smolder my heart
The winds carry a distinct tune,
Whispering sweetly, This is fate
I explore with curious eyes,
Those infinite orbs of heaven,
And I cant help but sigh,
When you smile,
As your soul brilliantly shines through
Poet and dreamer, mentor and student, lover and friend
We can only be respectable companions,
And nothing more
But, if we could be something far greater,
Than just two wandering souls in this vast world,
Oh, it would be perfectit would be...eternal
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-02-18 19:29:13]
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by breny on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 07:34:18 PM AEST
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this is so good! the ending really makes the whole poem fit nicely together. good write!
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 08:24:57 PM AEST
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| great write stephy |
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 12:24:00 AM AEST
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absolutley devine . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:45:18 PM AEST
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wow so beautiful and deep... I am at a loss
for words. I was captivated from the first word
to the last word.
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 08:32:26 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful! And so deep and heartfelt.
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:45:15 PM AEST
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Dynamic loved it
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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