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forgotten
Contributed by
Moonglow
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 10:47:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lay here on my bed,
The soft moonlight shinning on my face.
Soothing my aching head,
And hoping I'll someday leave this hateful place.
But you don't remember me do you?
You don't remember true loves first kiss.
But it's you I want to see through,
And find out what caused this.
I stare at these empty picture frames,
Torn memories litter the floor.
I'm happy that we stopped playing these games,
And eneded this tear stained war.
I have forgotten you,
And you can't remember me.
I know you still love me too,
But this is how it must be.
Copyright ©
Moonglow
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2005-02-19 10:47:33]
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Re: forgotten
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:05:39 AM AEST
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What a touching peice of writting, so regretful,
frightnen what love can do, u write well . . .
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Re: forgotten
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:03:47 PM AEST
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Yes, very lovely. Check your spelling, but some nice stuff here.
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