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Closed Circle
Contributed by
MLCstar
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I stare around this circle
At faces that I know
Surrounded by so many
And yet I feel alone
So long have I known them
And long have they known me
Though only my name, my face
not soul nor mind,
Nor do they want to,
content with themselves.
Can you break through a group?
Pre-formed though not with you.
I am constantly looking in
On something I will never have.
This Steel Circle, closed to me.
Outside is cold engulfed in darkness
That chills deep within the soul
And pushes the mind
Closer to a steep inviting cliff.
Copyright ©
MLCstar
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2005-02-19 17:24:59]
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Re: Closed Circle
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:48:29 PM AEST
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Hey I understand this poem alot...great job..I relate too...=]
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