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Never meant to be
Contributed by
necromant
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Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:38:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her heart felt warm at home when they were close together,
She used to think that their story was going to last forever,
Her body was relentlessly besieged by a rumbling emotion,
Expressing itself in various forms of undying devotion.
Yet, when they werent near, things started to go wrong,
Her chest ached with regret, making her misery so strong,
Constant opposition made her willpower weak and frail,
Killing their relationship by an unceasing verbal assail.
She fought against those who wanted their relationship to end,
But she struggled against the deaf, they wouldnt comprehend,
No, nothing she could say was going to make them understand,
Prohibited to see her love, her life, her dearest and closest friend.
Now, both away and lonely these young lovers lie watching the sunset,
Hoping to catch a glimpse of that same sky under which they once met.
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necromant
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2005-02-19 17:38:57]
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Re: Never meant to be
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by allforyou on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:46:55 PM AEST
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I love the ending...its so..sad....keep writing
--Kara |
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Re: Never meant to be
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:49:42 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, expecially those last two lines, in my opinion they complete the poem, and make it what it is.
Fantastic write, Anne.
*huggies* Phil xxx |
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