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In a Dream
Contributed by
orange
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Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 08:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lay awake
Wondering what to do
I close my eyes
And only see you
I know we went
Our seperate ways
I just wish
You'd come back one day.
I can see it now
A hug and a kiss
Just try to tell me
Those you don't miss.
I call you up
We don't even talk
So I sit around waiting
And all I do is sulk.
You say you miss me
But what does it mean
Are you ever coming back
Yeah...only in a dream.
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orange
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2005-02-19 20:40:53]
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Re: In a Dream
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by disturbed_silence on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:09:37 PM AEST
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i understand your poem...i know what you mean.
anyway good write and nice ending |
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Re: In a Dream
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by Gunda on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:14:10 PM AEST
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Not sure what it is but this poem just went straigth in to me... A really good write, hope to see more from you!!
Gunda |
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