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Consider Us
Contributed by
orange
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Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:49:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You ask me if I think its worth it
and baby yes I do
but I think the question is
do you believe this too?
We've wanted to be together
for so very,very long
now we've got the chance
do you think we belong?
You say that you don't go
with people like me
that I'm not like everyone else
but thats all I can be.
I may have some faults
but what can I do
I'm only human
a human that likes you.
I just wish we could look at the good
and throw away the bad
yeah that would be great
then we wouldn't have to be so sad.
I'll tell you this again
even though i think you don't believe me
I want this to work
I want us to be a we.
So I think I've gone on long enough
so I'm gonna tie this up
all I have to say is
"I hope you Consider Us"
Copyright ©
orange
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2005-02-19 23:49:04]
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Re: Consider Us
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by chazzay_2k5 on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:55:27 PM AEST
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| i like your poem it relates alot to me, and if ur writing about a certain sum 1 i hope it all works out for you xxx its great |
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Re: Consider Us
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 04:33:50 AM AEST
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I like this, very well writen and so full of emotions.
Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Consider Us
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by Gunda on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 07:17:43 AM AEST
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Another great write. The way you expres your feelings, just caputer me...
Gunda |
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