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Words can't Describe
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 03:55:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You are the
Only One
That makes me feel
*****
My Heart
Trusting, making me heal
****
Beautiful Vixen
I can't believe, it's so unreal
***
My Love
For you, even though, so surreal
**
Believe it
Or not, my love for you is from my heart
And heres the deal
*
It's been this way from the start
A feeling
I can't write
With my quill
....Okay....
My Dear?
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-20 15:55:16]
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Re: Words can't Describe
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:54:00 PM AEST
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| hrm, well here is a truthful comment clark. i think your murdered this one with forced rhymes. your format, is a better, but it just seems to illustrate your rhymes more. last night they werent so illustrated. your ending is different, and seems unnecessary almost. hrm. im in a bad mood right now, woot, bad comments on everyones poems....i cant wait till you stop writing nicely. i need some of your dark writes to make me feel better. |
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Re: Words can't Describe
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by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:39:34 PM AEST
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I feel the same way babe
Love you
Amber |
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