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Fear Lies In Their Eyes
Contributed by
vanilla_flame
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 06:01:59 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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I want to change
Break away from the old me
But so many things hold me back
I want to show the true me
It wouldn't matter, though
You people are too shallow
From this world, I want to be free
Black vines with red vines
wrap around my neck
like a cobra does to its prey
Dead trees surround me
Coldness lurks in the atmosphere
The blue jays have flown away
In their eyes I had seen fear
These dead woods near my home
remind me of my life.
Where sorrow likes to roam
and the Cold stabs the skin like a knife
But hope arises
Green grass is growing out
from underneath all the dead life
and soon the blue jays will return
with no more fear in their eyes
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Re: Fear Lies In Their Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:27:46 PM AEST
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'These dead woods near my home
remind me of my life.
Where sorrow likes to roam
and the Cold stabs the skin like a knife'
i like that part
this was well written
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