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Faces of God
Contributed by
freckle
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:14:54 PM in AEST
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The faces of God pass by my window
I see them in all their glory
So many of them seem unaware
So broken, and not at all holy
A few have reached truth and gone beyond
Full of pride they strut about
Others unsure, turn downward their heads
Tormented by questions and self-doubt
I want to cry out - to each face I see
I want to touch their souls to mine
I long to share with those around
We all can be - divine
I look out my window, and the world spins
The faces each moment are new
I press my face upon the glass
Always looking, always missing, you
Carol
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Re: Faces of God
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by weepingprophet on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:21:28 PM AEST
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I cannot begin to touch the depth of this write. I was captivated immediately by the flow. i could say good write but it would be a wast of a compliment for this peice. brilliant work is that unlike any other, it is the individualistic interpretation of emotion and judging by this write you've got it mastered.
~I left you weeping for me, i'll always be the one plunging off the bridge toward eternity.~weepingprophet
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Re: Faces of God
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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carol i don't do crituqe, but as far as i can see
this poem is beautiful, full of beautiful
religious fervor, and feelings from yor
convictions, well done . . .
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Re: Faces of God
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:35:46 AM AEST
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| WOW!!!! All I can say right now! WOW!!! |
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Re: Faces of God
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:51:29 PM AEST
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This gives me so many different places to go. I'm not sure what your theology is, but I do like this write.
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