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Sunset at Noon
Contributed by
ninnyfarfar
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:39:58 PM in AEST
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I always thought that when it comes
I'd be ready for the end
By that time I'd be resigned and tame
Death would appear a welcome friend
But what if I still want to live
Still want to learn and grow
What if I still have gifts to give
And I'm not yet ready to go
What if I am too young still
Not old enough to die
What if I want to wait until
I've experienced life to say goodbye
You were way too young
You were taken way too soon
Your time had just begun
The sun of your life set at noon
Whereever you have gone
Nearby or faraway
Please remember that with you
A piece of me died that day
Copyright ©
ninnyfarfar
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2005-02-20 22:39:58]
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Re: Sunset at Noon
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:23:37 PM AEST
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| This is so sad. I am very sorry for your loss. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Sunset at Noon
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by bethie on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:57:06 PM AEST
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| This is a heartfelt plea for another chance. I thought it made that point very well. Develop your writing. |
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