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Happy Birthday
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I sink my finger in
You scream,
letting your blood fall in drips
From my hard flesh.
I cannot begin
To describe
How funny this is.
From my metallic heart,
I wish you, happy birthday.
You shake,
And I pour out the sauce we've made
Over your quivering corpse.
You will be gone soon,
and you know it now.
Goodbye, and Happy Birthday.
With a kiss from my blood-soaked lips
I've sucked too much dry
From what I had missed
And the end is near,
in plain sight to view,
It's time, so Happy Birthday.
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
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2005-02-20 22:54:52]
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:03:32 PM AEST
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| Dark...I like it. Great work. Happy birthday too. |
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:47:45 PM AEST
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Well Happy Birthday Mines on the 21st!!!!!
Christina |
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by Jane_Doe on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:04:57 PM AEST
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| This was really powerful. Powerfully dark and depressed-like, but I really liked it with all of the imagery. I hope your next birthday is good! Thanks for commenting on my poem, b y the way. |
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