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Routine Romance
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Trusted Intuition
Crushing lifes
Suspected suspetion
Ending all
Predicted convictions
You break away
Trying to feel
Nothing to say
Scabs start to peel
Foreseeing the forgotten
Finding what was lost, while
Questioning the softened
Looking for all
Unscaved wounds, rotten
You end the day
By making a deal
Slicing away
You look at your knife as if it's satan
As I write your story
With my quill
Unseen circumstance
Choosing your next move
Redeeming trance
Cutting your veins with your
Routine Romance
As you open a new wound
One cut, one too deep
No future...soon
As your blood seeps
You think about your deal
...
Talking your own life
Without your will
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-20 23:00:57]
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Re: Routine Romance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:04:54 PM AEST
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| Powerful write....especially the ending. |
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Re: Routine Romance
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:17:58 PM AEST
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| i liked this one a lot clark. i especially liked the first stanza. |
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Re: Routine Romance
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by lauren0929 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:21:17 PM AEST
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| good poem,great ending |
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Re: Routine Romance
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by heartquake on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:40:19 AM AEST
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| Poetry, to me is all about creating a scene with words so adjectives are the best way to go, with that said, you do an incredible job describing feelings with just 2 words, a lot of people can't do that with an entire poem.... you get it done quick and do it all over again several times, great job |
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Re: Routine Romance
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by Les4567 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:52:50 AM AEST
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You are an excellent writer and talented.. i agree with earthquake you can describe feelings in 2 words that some people (including me) cant do in an entire poem...keep up the good work
nice write
~Leslie |
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