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Cry
Contributed by
weezer21
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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And I walk alone
Through the dark alleyway
Thinking of you
As my eyes stare away
From the people surrounded
By this town filled with fear
Of everything true
That our mothers hold dear
In the back of their minds
Everyone knows whats true
No one wants to admit
That your gone
Through and through
They hear our cries
But don't know that they're real
Because this town of fakeness
Doesn't want to see it's reality
Since our appearance is irrelevent
And no one knows
Your gone
And we cry
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2005-02-20 23:30:43]
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Re: Cry
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by lauren0929 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:41:42 PM AEST
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| beautiful i really like it |
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Re: Cry
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by tin on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:19:06 AM AEST
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Great write.
Because this town of fakeness
Doesn't want to see it's reality
i can really relate to those lines. |
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Re: Cry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:34:58 AM AEST
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| Great write. I can definately relate. I enjoyed reading this. Nice work. |
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Re: Cry
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by Les4567 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:25:10 AM AEST
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This was such a good poem.
I know how you feel. If you need someone to talk to I am here to listen.
Good write
~Leslie |
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Re: Cry
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by Les4567 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:25:43 AM AEST
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This was such a good poem.
I know how you feel. If you need someone to talk to I am here to listen.
Good write
~Leslie |
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