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6 Letters
Contributed by
SimplySammixl3
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:40:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Wow it's funny how I actually thought
that when you said forever,
you meant forever,
but obviously I'm not that clever.
I so loath you,
but then I think our times together and
Ohh, your touch on my skin,
it left Goosebumps within
and ugh, that voice,
it leaves me with one choice,
I cant help but to leap on you
like a jackrabbit forgetting all my good habits.
but now you left everything is cut,
I cant believe you said those ****** words.
You are an ****** *****
but I cant seem to stop my love for you.
Take me back, take me now,
love me again somehow.
I tell myself I hate you
but then I look back and...
ahh those eyes the gateway to you soul
and god damn I am loosing control,
I'm loosing control ,
you said that word,
you said forever,
and now I'm in a corner,
heart broken and severed.
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2005-02-21 10:40:16]
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Re: 6 Letters
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:01:25 AM AEST
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| i liked this a lot, especially the first few lines. powerfully done! |
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