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Having A Cuddle
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Last night we lay together in bed,
Thoughts of love drifting through our head,
We were making up for lost time,
For us to be apart is somewhat of a crime.
We shed some tears & held on tight,
Fell asleep cuddled up into the night,
To touch your face & skin once again,
Made me forget the past four days of pain.
We are taking it step by step, day by day,
I was falling more in love as we just lay,
I woke up in the night with a start,
I was so happy to know you were still in my heart.
I feel like my heart has a whole new beat,
Again I can feel the wind beneath my feet,
When we were apart I felt like I had died,
Never before so much had I cried.
I never knew of a pain like this,
Never knew just how much I would miss,
All the little things that you & I share,
I can sleep well at night knowing you will be there.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-21 11:55:49]
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Re: Having A Cuddle
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by Moonglow on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:33:04 PM AEST
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I really liked that, it flowed. It reminds me of my bf. ten outa ten. Keep writting your good at it
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Re: Having A Cuddle
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by Willofree on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:41:04 PM AEST
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A very romantic and loving expression of your emotions.
A beautiful write
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Re: Having A Cuddle
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:41:15 PM AEST
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Nice to that back Pixie ... I really like your writes when you feel upbeat about your relationship.
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Re: Having A Cuddle
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by BEBE on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:21:43 PM AEST
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This is a very sweet and romantic poem.. i like your writting.
GOD BLES.
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Re: Having A Cuddle
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:31:50 PM AEST
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A beautiful cuddle. It hurts like crazy when they are not there.
Fantastic
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Re: Having A Cuddle
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:53:34 PM AEST
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This was really a sweet and peaceful sounding write, Pixie.... Thank you for sharing this....
Hugs
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