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Gone
Contributed by
PoetBaby814
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 03:28:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My heart beats fast time seems to stop
In an instance you are gone
Your life crashes to a halt
One bullet took your life
but your memory lives on
Forever in my heart you'll stay
I turn to god to pray
My hope lies with in you
forever now you lay
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2005-02-21 15:28:36]
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Re: Gone
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 04:41:20 PM AEST
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| ah, now this was a very very good poem. I knew you were hiding it somewhere, and I found it. this was by far one of the best poems you have written, and one of the best I've read by any poet. you got potential kid, keep it up. |
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