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Crimson Desire
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Vermillion
Such a beautiful color
Vixen
I wish to murder
My desire
A feeling that
Tires
Making me weak
So
I wish for you dead
And with your death
Will also come in hand
The color red
...
Your life expires
As I fulfill
My
Crimson
Desire
...
And as I hold your head in hand
I ask you to laugh now and forever
...
If you can!
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-21 16:29:25]
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Re: Crimson Desire
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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| Call me demented..but I love it |
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Re: Crimson Desire
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:36:42 PM AEST
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lol, that comment was funny. i know i am demented and i love it more! this reminded me of slipknot with the vermillion part, cant go wrong with that.
"i can see you, but you cant see me
i could touch you, and you wouldnt even feel me
wait a second and youll settle down?
im really waiting till you let your guard down
youre relaxed, youre sublime, youre amazing" thats my favorite tid bit by them... |
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Re: Crimson Desire
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:38:34 AM AEST
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| creepy.. i love it! |
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Re: Crimson Desire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:28:33 AM AEST
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this is really dark and creepy...but a great write.
i love it.
- Bethani - |
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