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Imprisoned
Contributed by
AzurePaladin
on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i'm lost in a twisted palace
built of all your precious praise.
i'm unfamiliar with this world.
love shines, blinding me in rays.
you've forced me to play princess here;
long ago, an angel you expect of me.
i'll try my hardest not to disappoint you;
you'd despise what you'd otherwise see.
Copyright ©
AzurePaladin
... [
2002-12-13 17:00:00]
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Re: Imprisoned
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by Jessica_Saini on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 12:22:06 PM AEST
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Nice write!
~Jessica |
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Re: Imprisoned
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by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 06:57:50 PM AEST
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I really like this. It's good. And you should put up more poems from that time period.
YS |
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Re: Imprisoned
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:53:34 AM AEST
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;D Guess who?
Wow, this one I do not think I had read before. It's really really written well, and it makes me understand you more, the way you were. So sad!
Mikie! <3 |
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Re: Imprisoned
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:54:13 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Like the last lines especially. |
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