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Running Here and There
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:10:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We run all around
New people to meet
Old friends to see
Our food to eat
I hope to surprise you
A spontaneous thought
When I get where "you are"
I find not what I sought
I miss the times where
You're entwined in my arms
And our breathing is matched
Like our kindness and charm
And Sometimes you
Seem not to care
To just turn and talk
Like Im not there
I feel ignored
Or pushed aside
And overlooked
With a lack of pride
It will be ok
And I do still see you
Just not as much as I want
Though I will always pursue
And I do love you babe
My dear Chelsea Chase
I'll see ya around
From place to place ;)
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Re: Running Here and There
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by bethie on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:25:31 PM AEST
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Pain and pithy. I liked it. Chelsea should appreciate your style at least.
Peace and happiness
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Re: Running Here and There
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by lilsprtygrl21 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:52:59 PM AEST
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| Nice Write. I've experienced this before, but with a guy. You're right, it is very hard to keep a good relationship. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Running Here and There
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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I think we've resolved this issue, but things are still kind of shaky.
Although I don't like the situation, the changes you made to this poem to describe this situation increased the wellness of this poem a lot. This is a really great self-expression, superbly written. The word choice was extremely exquisite compared to anything else you've ever written. I mean, this is brilliantly worded. Your best poem so far.
I hope we fix all of this soon.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Running Here and There
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:04:22 PM AEST
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| please dont ask for comments, its unnecessary, your work deserves them... |
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