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Time Waisted
Contributed by
lilsprtygrl21
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:01:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Old Times
I remember when we used to go outside on a Summer day.
The thought of breaking our relationship was never in my mind to stay.
The old times we shared...
I thought you really cared.
Now look at us.
Where are we?
It's like I'm nothing at all to you.
I guess our relationship, the things you do, is just a big joke.
Even though we are different,
You're a guy and I'm a girl,
I thought that our realtionship would be at least alright.
Now I don't feel like your a true friend each coming day and night.
Why do I have this pressing feeling that wants me to still be friends with you?
I feel like I'm going to cry,
While you just sit there and lie to try to tell me you are busy.
I can see it on your face. Why?
I'm tired of this same old thing, I don't think we can be "friends".
So, I hope to tell you this is finally the end.
There's not much I can say, there's not a whole lot to look back on.
I'm just glad to see that I'm moving ahead after all this time waisted...
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Re: Time Waisted
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:06:26 PM AEST
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| Great write! I absolutely can relate to this piece you wrote. |
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Re: Time Waisted
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:20:41 PM AEST
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wow nice write i can 110%relate to this wonderful write of urs,keep up the great job,loven it
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Re: Time Waisted
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by poky1502 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:45:45 AM AEST
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| people change, dont second guess it gets you nowhere but yeah movin ons always hard but so much better than wodering what was or what could have been |
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Re: Time Waisted
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:29:25 PM AEST
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Good job I felt your mixed up emotions hurt,love,and wanting.
You did the right thing.Don't let any guy play you.
Good poem keep writing
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