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Beautiful Girl of Mine
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:05:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I start to feel The numbness fade I see you in my eyes A sight I could stare at For days
I can't help but doubt reality Such a beautiful scene I just can't believe we are. That you are my Beautiful queen
I see you again Am I in a dream? My metal heart starts to melt. My eyes just can't believe You are with me
Holding my hand Walking side by side I don't care what others think Because without you I'd have already died.
You wipe the tears cried You ease the fears, I hide You are my seer without you I'd have given up, would'nt Have tried
Thank you for easing my mind... You beautiful girl Of mine
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Re: Beautiful Girl of Mine
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:10:43 PM AEST (User
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Lovely write. It really would make a girl melt. I hope the girl that inspired this piece has read it. She'd love it! :-) |
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Re: Beautiful Girl of Mine
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:33:20 PM AEST (User
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the nicest write that could be made... |
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Re: Beautiful Girl of Mine
(User Rating: 1 ) by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:18:17 PM AEST (User
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I will always be yours no
matter what. I love you
Love you
Amber |
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Re: Beautiful Girl of Mine
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:39:19 AM AEST (User
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This is beautiful Clark! I hope you and Amber will stay together forever. This was very sweet, great write.
--amanda-- |
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