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Four Words
Contributed by
Stellar
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:10:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There's such an emptiness in my heart
And it's filled with sadness for what I've lost
I had what I thought I never could
I had a love but at such a heavy cost
The hurt he brought me was so great
And so deep and painful is the scar
Yet I can't quiet the love that's left
And the memory of "what was" is never far
I saw him today for a little while
He looked so intensely in my eyes
As he walked me back to my car
He said four words to both our surprise
"We'll have our day" he whispered
Almost as quietly he quickly took it back
Why does he say those words to me
It hits me like a brick and throws me off track
I still have so much love here for him
And in his eyes it seems he does for me
Why then are we living separate lives
Why is this the way it has to be
Copyright ©
Stellar
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2005-02-21 20:10:28]
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Re: Four Words
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by Stitch on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:13:13 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write. Some loves long outlast their welcome. Hmmm, maybe there's a poem there. I like your name and your style.
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Re: Four Words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:14:40 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem!! I can relate, and I'm sure there are so many other people who can too. Things get easier with time, and I wish you both the best, whether it's together again or separate :-) |
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Re: Four Words
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:16:57 PM AEST
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awesome write,keep up the great job,loven it
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Re: Four Words
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:10:45 PM AEST
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that was so excellently written, deep and moving
pix xx |
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Re: Four Words
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:42:31 AM AEST
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This is a great poem I think you did a fantastic job. I hope one day you do get back together. In the mean time keep up the great writes!
--amanda-- |
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