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Floaters
Contributed by
kewter
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Some may say
We are floaters
Invisible creatures
Hovering over this earth
Like ghosts
With spirit but no firm opinions
Of our own.
We use others voices
With a recording in our voice box
The muffled voice speaking for us
Making us say what they wish
Our strands change colors
Blonde, brown, black and blue
People may judge
Saying we are nave
Ignoring views and forcing us to act
Let them judge while we try to figure out who and what
We are
Well I know I have virgin opinions
Let me speak my mind.
Copyright ©
kewter
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2005-02-21 20:20:21]
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Re: Floaters
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by Stitch on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:23:06 PM AEST
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An interesting and thought-provoking first post.
I'll be looking for more.
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Re: Floaters
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:51:31 PM AEST
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| I completely agree |
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Re: Floaters
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:30:19 AM AEST
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| This is very well written. I like the meaning of this poem a lot |
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