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Last Train Leaving
Contributed by
juliETTE
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 04:29:57 AM in AEST
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Last train leaving, this side of midnight
Sitting in the back seat, my life flashes before my eyes.
Only God knows where Im going, every fool knows where Ive been
But as soon as I get there, I can start all over again.
I fought my last fight, swear I have cried my last cold tear,
I had a dream about a better place, and thats how I wound up here.
I am wearing my whole life, these shadowed bruises I scatter about,
I just might have missed my chance, but there is only one way to find out.
On this last train leaving, this side of midnight,
I lay my broken heart, my troubles, and my pride.
On the floor of this machine, I leave all the things that I dont need,
And the sun is gonna shine on the other side of these tracks
Cause Im not looking back.
Something snapped inside of me, when I loved you but set you free,
To make true on a promise that wasnt ever meant to be.
I cant hold my head up high, without you here by my side,
So I stepped out on him tonight, for the last time.
And Im on the last train leaving, this side of midnight,
I want to be where you are, need your arms to hold me tight.
Sitting in the back seat, believing you can save me,
You are gonna make everything alright, on the other side,
Of this last train leaving, this side of midnight.
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juliETTE
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2005-02-22 04:29:57]
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Re: Last Train Leaving
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by marshmalloska on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:53:15 AM AEST
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| your absolutely crazy, or just crazily modest. That was a brilliant poem and like to see something youve written that you think is GOOD!! It works really well without seeming to try too hard. Oh yes, and what were your forbidden thoughts, pray tell? |
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Re: Last Train Leaving
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:02:26 AM AEST
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| I think it's great. But, then I'm not a poet so that may not be what you needed to hear. It's good. |
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Re: Last Train Leaving
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:19:59 AM AEST
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I think this is written very well.
Nothing needs to be changed. I actually like it alot. Great write |
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Re: Last Train Leaving
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:39:29 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwo! there's nuthing 2 fix here.
Awesome masterpeice.
juhhs,
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Re: Last Train Leaving
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:40:36 AM AEST
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oh me that was suppose to be
huggs |
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Re: Last Train Leaving
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:24:39 PM AEST
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| Im a tad bit late on reading, but Im very glad I did..this was beautiful, and as others have said--nothing here needs to be changed, be proud because this is..amazing |
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