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Is it Spring?
Contributed by
lilsprtygrl21
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:03:16 AM in AEST
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Is it Spring?
I hear the birds chirp as I look outside,
to find a beautiful, sunny day.
I think to myself, in a funny way,
but could this be what I think it is?
I walk outside only to smell the spring air;
whistling so fresh, so sweet, so fair.
The first day of spring! What I thought was right!
I'm tired of this chilly winter, like on Christmas night!
In the afternoon, I shall play basketball,
soaking up this season of spring.
As I go about this lovely day,
you may often hear me sing.
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lilsprtygrl21
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2005-02-22 11:03:16]
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Re: Is it Spring?
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:10:28 PM AEST
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I live in Michigan
Can hardly wait for spring to come
Nice pome on longing for spring
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Re: Is it Spring?
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by B-Rut on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:13:21 PM AEST
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| You've got the right idea of the emotions to evoke. But I think your rhythm and rhymes need work. Also, the poem just seems to end. |
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Re: Is it Spring?
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by foxfire44 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:55:40 PM AEST
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| you have got me likeing spring nice work ....keep it up |
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