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Untitled
Contributed by
opusmind
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:23:06 PM in AEST
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I am the whisper that creeps along the ocean floor
I am the echo residing within the canyon
The breath of inspiration
The birth of devastation
I call unto you to do my most gracious deed
And my most unruly proposition
I am the cobwebs hanging from the gates of pearl
I am the flicker of the final shed of light
The crest of the horizon
The bottle holding poison
I am dressed in white yet my clothes are black
A paradox of reason
You are the canvas that I am to burn tonight
You are the ambassador
The last redemption?
The next generation?
You are the spectator on center stage
And I can feel your tension
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opusmind
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2005-02-22 12:23:06]
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Re: Untitled
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:06:04 PM AEST
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| Very good! You have a great talent! |
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Re: Untitled
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:24:15 AM AEST
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amazing imagery. not sure i grasp the full meaning of the poem but was impressed with the word useage.
"I am the cobwebs hanging from the gates of pearl
I am the flicker of the final shed of light"
the pictures you have painted are breathtaking. |
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